alright
well I dont know a whole lot cause im not very great at making music myself...check it out if you dont believe me...
But toward the end your going wacky with the cymbals. It got kind of annoying. The first minutes and a half ar so is almost the same pattern the whole time...
It was alright though. Make it have more patterns, and work on decreasing the amount of cymbals.
Keep it up, and you'll get good!